Archive for February, 2007

Ashley

February 28, 2007

Ashley is a very cute and sweet girl. Her family really loves her a lot. The disorder which is has is very rare. I have never heard about it before. May be as she grows older she can be like other people.

The only topic I think of for my reserch essay is Attention Deficiet Disorder (ADD) I am not aware of any other disorder.

comments

February 27, 2007

I have received a comment of analyzing instead of arguing about the article. I will try to analyze my essay a bit more than what I have done for this paper.

Talking about the disadvantages of Marijuana was my strongest point in the essay. This states that how much harmful are Marijuana for everyone.

I am not sure about my weaknesses in my essay.

The Write Site would be a great help to go to. But I have never been there before but I will try to go there next time.

Yes I can go to the Write Site and ask them to help me revise my essay so that I can get a better grade.

race

February 13, 2007

Well there has been times were I was not treated fairly. People make me feel that they are supiorer to me just bacause of their race or ethnicity. Today a lot of people are xenophobia and ethnocentrism since they do not accept or treat people of different race. I personally dont know anyone with these belifs but yes there are people who are like that. I have never shared with anyone about this because I feel its personal and everyone has different point of views.

My Reading

February 13, 2007

I had almost forgotten about the readings I had to do for this class. Last week I was trying to get my Article ready. I also had a test on this Monday in my Government class, I was studying for it.

Culture

February 6, 2007

Culture consists of different clothing, food, language, heritage and religion. When a group of people with similar kind of language, food, clothing and heritage come together, they form a culture. I belong to an Indian Culture because I have been born and brought up in India. I speak Indian language, I eat Indian food and I wear Indian dress which makes me feel like a part of India. I would like to know more about other Asian Cultures, American Culture, European Culture, African Culture and Mexican Culture.

1. Asian Culture: speak different languages.

2. American Culture: everyone works.

3. European Culture: do agriculture.

4. African Culture: colorful costumes.

5. Mexican Culture: have large families.

essay 1 blog

February 1, 2007

I would give the author very little credit. He has’nt very well persuaded the audience. Well his article is good but it does’nt have enough data or any good points on why it should be legalized. If I would be the author, I would analyze and explain on my topic and I would be more specific. The author does not have enough information or education on his topic. Well I would’nt give any credits to my article but I would make sure that I have stated by points and I would also make sure that I have given good data or information to my audience.