Ashley

February 28, 2007 by zohrajiwani

Ashley is a very cute and sweet girl. Her family really loves her a lot. The disorder which is has is very rare. I have never heard about it before. May be as she grows older she can be like other people.

The only topic I think of for my reserch essay is Attention Deficiet Disorder (ADD) I am not aware of any other disorder.

comments

February 27, 2007 by zohrajiwani

I have received a comment of analyzing instead of arguing about the article. I will try to analyze my essay a bit more than what I have done for this paper.

Talking about the disadvantages of Marijuana was my strongest point in the essay. This states that how much harmful are Marijuana for everyone.

I am not sure about my weaknesses in my essay.

The Write Site would be a great help to go to. But I have never been there before but I will try to go there next time.

Yes I can go to the Write Site and ask them to help me revise my essay so that I can get a better grade.

race

February 13, 2007 by zohrajiwani

Well there has been times were I was not treated fairly. People make me feel that they are supiorer to me just bacause of their race or ethnicity. Today a lot of people are xenophobia and ethnocentrism since they do not accept or treat people of different race. I personally dont know anyone with these belifs but yes there are people who are like that. I have never shared with anyone about this because I feel its personal and everyone has different point of views.

My Reading

February 13, 2007 by zohrajiwani

I had almost forgotten about the readings I had to do for this class. Last week I was trying to get my Article ready. I also had a test on this Monday in my Government class, I was studying for it.

Culture

February 6, 2007 by zohrajiwani

Culture consists of different clothing, food, language, heritage and religion. When a group of people with similar kind of language, food, clothing and heritage come together, they form a culture. I belong to an Indian Culture because I have been born and brought up in India. I speak Indian language, I eat Indian food and I wear Indian dress which makes me feel like a part of India. I would like to know more about other Asian Cultures, American Culture, European Culture, African Culture and Mexican Culture.

1. Asian Culture: speak different languages.

2. American Culture: everyone works.

3. European Culture: do agriculture.

4. African Culture: colorful costumes.

5. Mexican Culture: have large families.

essay 1 blog

February 1, 2007 by zohrajiwani

I would give the author very little credit. He has’nt very well persuaded the audience. Well his article is good but it does’nt have enough data or any good points on why it should be legalized. If I would be the author, I would analyze and explain on my topic and I would be more specific. The author does not have enough information or education on his topic. Well I would’nt give any credits to my article but I would make sure that I have stated by points and I would also make sure that I have given good data or information to my audience.

Ethos, Pathos and Logos.

January 25, 2007 by zohrajiwani

 The Sky Byakuugan Warrior Production mainly has an ethos appeal since this video has a very good strategy to persuade people that there is nothing wrong if a person is gay. This video had a very strong appeal and I don’t think this video needs any changes accept for taking out inappropriate words from the video. This video doesn’t have any other appeal. This video made me realize that gay people should also get equal rights from the law. They should not be illtreated. If I was the director, I would’nt have used abusive words.

In the second video, it talked about real life stories of the people who have not been treated fairly. I think it has a pathos appeal since this video is about people’s feelings n emotions. This video is a very sentiment and very touching video and it can change the audience’s point of view.  

YouTube

January 23, 2007 by zohrajiwani

Today plenty of people use napster or youtube to listen to their favourite music. I think youtube or napster should be legal since almost everyone uses it.

Marijuana in Illinois

January 23, 2007 by zohrajiwani

In the year 2006, the U.S. Justice Department had taken a Drug Threat Assesment in which we can draw a conclusion that the use of marijuana is increasing. According to this assesment, I feel that marijuana should be illlegalized.

My most difficult writing assignment.

January 18, 2007 by zohrajiwani

I have written plenty of assignments till now. I have always tried my best to do my assignments as good as I can. Everyone goes through some problems while doing their assignments. I have also had problems while writing my assignment. The most difficult assignment I have ever had was to write a descriptive essay.

The essay had to be five pages long with plenty of adjective or descriptive words. I first did a lot of research for my topic. Then I had to prepare a rough draft of my assignment. We were asked to read from our rough draft in class. So the teacher makes sure we are on the right track.

I had prepared my rough draft but it was not enough. I needed more information to write on my topic in order to make it five pages long. My teacher asked me to make it not less than five pages. It was really difficult to get more data to add to my paper.  

Writing a very long descriptive essay was really hard for me. This assignment was my most difficult assignment I have ever had.